case analyzing International Commercial Arbitration

I have already wrote the paper, but I need someone to review it and make correction, if needed, with adding some points to support my argument. Also, in regards to the part where I should state my own opinion , I need you to restate my opinion and the outcomes of following that option with adding some examples and reasoning of following this option.Helpful Materials will be attached.The case aslo will be attached along with another similar case which you can rely on since both cases are having the same facts.Please make citation and refrences.Notice that it is almost an editing process and my paper will be attached after the hand shake.